Petition letter corrections made in the original.
helpful_leo - Have made the corrections and updates as you suggested on the original. Thank you.
Only thing not changed was the use of the word "discriminatory". I do think it is an appropriate word to use here because the current status, by definition, is based on "group of people" based on country of origin.
imdeng - can you please update the petition? I see it has already received 102 signs.
q, helpful_leo - Please remove the old quoted text from your messages so that folks don't copy that version by mistake if they decide to post it outside of imdeng's petition.
Updated version is here.
Thanks!